Well this is definitely wrong, it is still commented out. At least on mine, that will not work.
<!-- <address>some.server.com</address> -->
<!-- <localaddress>192.168.0.5</localaddress> -->
It should be something more like this.
<address>blackdeath.com</address>
<localaddress>192.168.0.5</localaddress>
Put your external ip in the address field, like so.
<address>199.199.199.199</address>
But you are not out of the woods yet, give me a list of what you forwarded on the router.