Couple tips for you:
Don't use comma on final array item - wont kill your script, but incorrect use
Emotes don't need a space at the beginning as it already prints one after npc name - just a note
Should use summonitem instead of SummonItem - this can kill script
Here is a good resource:
http://www.eqemulator.net/wiki/wikka...=QuestTutorial
Oh and this would be easier to read if you use code blocks