The first one is okay, but the edges on some of the letterings seem to have...I dunno how to describe, crusty? Maybe applying a light blur to it would make it look a bit smoother.
The GIF...I think there's too many lighting effects on the Jedi Knight 3 letterings, and the other words aren't quite delayed enough. Like for "Rebels Of Another Realm," try to make it so those frames last longer, so there effect sets in more.
Hope that helps.
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